I can finally upload to deviantart but it looks horrible

[tentionmaru7]

http://shadowguy7.deviantart.com/art/my-first-artwork-probably-criticisms-660067552
I hope you enjoy...my ugly art
I drew it on my phone

[GhostX5]

Looks pretty neat. 7/10

I don't think our characters really need bipods for such weapons like Minigun C-02m, but this looks fine. Aren't you supposed to post this in Other Art, 'cuz I don't think this would fit for PB2.5, because none of the guns here are belt-fed. And the weapon does not look futuristic.

[tentionmaru7]

a M60 remake with bullets that has small explosions, for the cs-boss
maybe powerfull but inaccurate ( VERY inaccurate )

edit : I'm having problems with autodesk.Inc drawing pad, to get complete tools, I need to pay 65.000 IDR, and I don't have a redeem code and credit card
free trial seems harsh, I accept but when I see the text "you'll be charged 66000 IDR per day" and I don't know what does "charged" mean so I cancelled

[Fish 20]

I hope you enjoy...my ugly art

I think you spelled awesome wrong, because that's really well done. 9/10

[Hikarikaze]

It's not horrible; it looks horrible to you because you personally think it's horrible. In all forms of art, the eyes see what it wants to see. If you want to see your own work as horrible, that's what you will and are going to see

Anyways, to be fair, it's not bad but it could be better. Make the outlines less rough, work on proportions and maybe ergonomics a little bit more (the pistol grip should be a bit shorter and more angled), and experiment outside the grayscale color palette. Some additional details would also be good to include

Factoring all of that in, I'll give this a 6.5/10

[tentionmaru7]

to fish 20, hikarikaze and ghostx5 :
thanks guys

[GhostX5]

No problem man! You'll get better next time!

[tentionmaru7]

I wonder what failiureguy would say if he see this crap :/

[Anechoic]

For an ammunition to be that small with a big barrel that stereotypically looks like a futuristic lazer heavy machine gun. I expect nothing less than your best strategies with this *Also add some lens flares for refinement.*

[tentionmaru7]

For an ammunition to be that small with a big barrel that stereotypically looks like a futuristic lazer heavy machine gun. I expect nothing less than your best strategies with this *Also add some lens flares for refinement.*

Lens flares? What is that?
Note : i factory reset my phone but wont work to connect to the wi-fi again, cannot draw anymore, sorry

[Anechoic]

For an ammunition to be that small with a big barrel that stereotypically looks like a futuristic lazer heavy machine gun. I expect nothing less than your best strategies with this *Also add some lens flares for refinement.*

Lens flares? What is that?
Note : i factory reset my phone but wont work to connect to the wi-fi again, cannot draw anymore, sorry

Basically it's the rays of a light