by iDomino
» 8 July 2016, 11:23
I'm glad to see Pixel art maps popping out here in PB2. I think I'll start with the positive points
+ You did not create foul art. Every pixel has it's place where it does belong.
+ I like the idea of a Museum´.
+ The workers - Great message for a WIP map.
+ The gun art.
+ The heroes art.
Negatives
- You used very very easy artwork. It looks good, but more like you googled these pixel arts and picked the easiest out.
- You implemented foreign artwork as such as the Jigsaw. It's cool to have someone helping you with the map, but you should really try to make this on your own.
- Repeated artwork. As a visitor with high expectations towards such maps I wouldn't fancy 10 mushrooms in a row. The more you do of the same, the more boring it'll look.
- The Heroes. The Spiderman and the Iron man are well made. That's the + from my side. But in the other you replaced the red with Blue color and the other just has a face.
- The colors. Kiriakos once replied to my pixel art map, I should implement doors and colorize them instead of using PB2 background. In fact, it really looks better.
- The Gun art. I know that this gun art was fan-made and I'm about to use such things either in my map, but why these guns? IMO, the guns look to familiar to satisfy me.
-The Mini-saw. If you want to bring "life" into the map, you'll need to choose wether you want an ART map or an adventure map including art. The mini-saw was literally "mini.
I rated your map 3 stars. Hope to see more work from you