Random Guns

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Random Guns

Postby Civil-Lite » 14 December 2015, 02:11

Here are 2 guns I created, Im sure they will look nice as an update for PB2.5. Comment if you like :D . Also try and think of some names for it since i cant think of any. Just imagine having one of these in your hands but a better version of it, I still work on the designs if you want me to add a bit more.
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Re: Random Guns

Postby KARL SERG » 14 December 2015, 13:16

They look too simplistic IMO. Do you think you could make more Lines and try to make them less Edgy? They would fit much better that way.

For now, I can't give it more than a 3/10. Sorry.
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Re: Random Guns

Postby Hikarikaze » 17 December 2015, 05:29

All of them look too blocky. Use curves and slopes to further give your designs a better shape. Some of the concepts look exaggerated and ridiculous (not that that's bad or anything) like the mounted MG thing with the ridiculously huge bullets. Some backstory to these weapons would also help because I literally don't know what I'm even looking at.

What program do you use? I could offer some tips on how to improve your work.
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Re: Random Guns

Postby Thundrex » 17 December 2015, 09:11

These guns are insanely blocky and, well, not very realistic in any immediate respects. The grips are literally rectangles.... Try different styles and get really creative. One that I'd like to be seen remade is the last, green one.

Try using curves and instead of fully black outlines, use a color a few shades lower than what's inside.

Along with that, try looking at guns and seeing how things are placed. Try to make some creative laser guns, but add some realism, just my recommendation.

The concepts you have right now aren't, honestly, too good, but I think you can improve. Good luck. :)
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