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Railwars

Postby Foy » 22 November 2015, 06:39

Map name: Railwars
Map ID: foy-
Map description: Railwars with a twist!
Map Page Link: http://plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=foy-&id=702886
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=foy-
Brief Description: A 4vs4 Railwars map. But instead of using rail guns. You use defibs!!
The defib in the 6th slot is for shooting rails. The defib in 5th slot is for healing.
Also, Fake Water as background. Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay.

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Well, enjoy. :D (Opinions are welcome here! Please report any bugs or glitches!) :thank:
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Re: Railwars

Postby Terabrion » 22 November 2015, 12:14

You could have at least covered the walls properly, so people would not see the limit of the water region...
http://prntscr.com/95kdh8

Also, I have to say the colors are too shiny.
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Re: Railwars

Postby Foy » 23 November 2015, 09:51

Terabrion wrote:You could have at least covered the walls properly, so people would not see the limit of the water region...
http://prntscr.com/95kdh8

Also, I have to say the colors are too shiny.



On it! :)
Might be hard trying to find a new HTML color.
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Re: Railwars

Postby Terabrion » 23 November 2015, 13:23

Foy wrote:On it! :)
Might be hard trying to find a new HTML color.

Simply use color-hex.com
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They want me to fail (they want me to fail)
I am falling
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Re: Railwars

Postby Silent Aurora » 23 November 2015, 19:01

Don't like the black sky imo, try it with night sky. http://prntscr.com/95zuga
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Re: Railwars

Postby Foy » 24 November 2015, 09:20

Silent Aurora wrote:Don't like the black sky imo, try it with night sky. http://prntscr.com/95zuga



I am on it!! :D


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Terabrion wrote:
Foy wrote:On it! :)
Might be hard trying to find a new HTML color.

Simply use color-hex.com



Thanks! Changed color to red and blue. Instead of yellow and brown. (Because I couldn't see a difference when I chose a different style of yellow and brown) Characters are now Red and Blue also. :D
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Re: Railwars

Postby Kiriakos Gr96 » 24 November 2015, 14:30

Foy please dont double post the next time edit your post
about the map
nice with simple desing
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Re: Railwars

Postby Foy » 25 November 2015, 09:18

KIRIAKOS GR96 wrote:Foy please dont double post the next time edit your post
about the map
nice with simple desing


Thank you! :D
Glad you liked it.
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Re: Railwars

Postby Thundrex » 25 November 2015, 09:52

The concept is interesting, I will say that. As for the map itself, it seems to be rushed, cramped and overall not too great. I would suggest adding more platforms and making the area in general a bit larger.

When it comes down to it, the only original/interesting bit is the bugged water with the red and blue HEX codes.
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Re: Railwars

Postby xChakra » 25 November 2015, 22:02

It seems like you rushed this map, and also you didn't do a great job with the colors, as you tried to come as close to the characters shade as possible, making the map look a bit glitched/buggy, and in my opinion, ugly.
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