[APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

[APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby scarra » 18 June 2020, 15:40

1]
- To the best of my knowledge, the following map fits all requirements to be approved: YES
- The following map contains no unfair hidden features: YES
- The following map contains nothing against the PB2 Code of Conduct: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Required Reading for posting a Map Approval Request: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Map Approval Rules: YES

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- Map Name: Cold Dark Night
- Map ID: scarra-gb
- Link to Map Page: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m= ... &id=867710
- Link to Map Demo: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=scarra-gb

[3]
- Give a brief description of the map: A medium size map for 8 players.
- Why you think the map deserves to be approved: Fits all requirements.
- Any other comments: none
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby CreeperHunter55 » 19 June 2020, 11:56

I think we already have enough better maps of this setting

spartan 138-sidewinder

krow-plazma_war

pixelbyte-intact
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby Kiriakos Gr96 » 19 June 2020, 16:20

Nice map you submited
I did not find any errors playing the map its a simple yet an interesting map

Add here invisible doors
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I would suggest to add some details to the bgs try to color the backgounds and seven the sky too?
So the map looks more unique and has a theme.
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby scarra » 20 June 2020, 09:44

Updates:
-Fixed BG glow
-Added details to the BG
-Added minor updates to the map layout

Kiriakos Gr96 wrote:Nice map you submited
I did not find any errors playing the map its a simple yet an interesting map

Add here invisible doors
Spoiler: Show More



I would suggest to add some details to the bgs try to color the backgounds and seven the sky too?
So the map looks more unique and has a theme.

Alright, I added the details to the BG I also added color to the sky, and I also added minor changes to the map layout.
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby Build » 20 June 2020, 12:38

what is this supposed to be?
and a glowing edge


???


lamp is not centered


more glowing edges


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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby scarra » 20 June 2020, 13:15

Fixed the glowing edges and centered the lamp also those are aesthetics.
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby CreeperHunter55 » 20 June 2020, 14:10

Despite the improvement, the map still has a lot of questions.

1. Almost the entire map is bad in the of movement and dynamics wise. Too many unnecessary walls which make the map look pretentious






2. At the first scrn this part of map looks really fancy on its diagonally decorating. Also, some parts of the BG decor look only to the right, even on the right side of the map, which should not be. Everything should lead the eyes to the center, not to a dead end of map.


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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby scarra » 20 June 2020, 14:53

Removed the unnecessary walls and updated the BG Decor and also added glowing decor on the red team spawn.
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby CreeperHunter55 » 20 June 2020, 22:06

After playtest our team noticed next problems:



Make sure that the end of map isn't visible

There are also a lot of weapons on the map. I'd put the rifle or shotgun away
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby scarra » 21 June 2020, 05:28

Alright, I removed the pusher inside the teleporter, I also fixed the campspot, and made the leftside of the map not visible.
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby kubakuba » 21 June 2020, 14:06

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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby scarra » 21 June 2020, 14:52

Alright, fixed.
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby kubakuba » 23 June 2020, 08:43

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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby scarra » 23 June 2020, 09:42

Alright, I added the rest of the elevator bg, changed the C-01r Assault Rifle to PHANX-150 Bison, also made the tp light color lighter.
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby Kiriakos Gr96 » 23 June 2020, 14:19

scarra wrote:Alright, I added the rest of the elevator bg, changed the C-01r Assault Rifle to PHANX-150 Bison, also made the tp light color lighter.

PHANX-150 Bison has high fire sound (also it has very high dps) i would suggest to replace it with PHANX-92 Falconet.
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby scarra » 23 June 2020, 14:51

Alright, but imo PHANX-92's firerate is too slow so i'll change it to Assault Rifle CS-IK instead.
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] scarra-gb

Postby Kiriakos Gr96 » 23 June 2020, 16:20

Map is now approved.
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