[MAP REQUEST] robloxplazmaalen_yt-tango

[MAP REQUEST] robloxplazmaalen_yt-tango

Postby robloxplazmaalen_YT » 20 October 2018, 02:13

[1]
- To the best of my knowledge, the following map fits all requirements to be approved: YES
- The following map contains no unfair hidden features: YES
- The following map contains nothing against the PB2 Code of Conduct: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Required Reading for posting a Map Approval Request: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Map Approval Rules: YES

[2]
- Map Name: Tango Multiplayer Match
- Map ID: robloxplazmaalen_yt-tango
- Link to Map Page: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m= ... &id=912023
- Link to Map Demo: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=r ... n_yt-tango

[3]
- Give a brief description of the map: It's about a middle map fighting over 2 teams and trying to get the most kills and deaths.
- Why you think the map deserves to be approved: It is a good map and 2 teams fighting over. It has all overlap and perfectly fixed some bugs. One of my friends gave me ideas to listen up.
- Any other comments: Just hoping to be approval my map. So I'm gonna pray to myself if it does.
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Re: [MAP REQUEST] robloxplazmaalen_yt-tango

Postby Protonoid » 20 October 2018, 06:28

Hi there,
I reviewed your map, here are the flaws that I detected during my run :
https://i.imgur.com/QjQ35Xd.png : It would be to easy to end the round in only a few seconds, players spawn face-to-face to each other, there should be some time for players to take their positions and get ready.

https://i.imgur.com/RJxksNw.png : This tunnel would be my favorite place if I were a camper, the previous flaw applies here as well.

• Map border is too thin, which doesn't look very well at all.
• How in the world you expect players to access this area of your map easily without selfboosting and crouching.

• Same with this area, also it is not symmetrical, which is unfair for either of the teams.

• If you wish your map to be played in DM/TDM mode, there are no weapons laid around the map, players would have no defence upon spawning, plus there are not enough covers to hide through.

• No HE nades given to deal with campers.

I'm sorry but I feel your map is not suitable for approval in my opinion, you need to seriously work A LOT on this.
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Postby robloxplazmaalen_YT » 20 October 2018, 06:54

I understand, I'll fix that to be approval. I'll tell one of my idea makers to fix all of this! Thanks for your support!
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Re: BACK REQUEST

Postby Protonoid » 20 October 2018, 07:21

robloxplazmaalen_YT wrote:I understand, I'll fix that to be approval. I'll tell one of my idea makers to fix all of this! Thanks for your support!


No problem :D
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Re: [MAP REQUEST] robloxplazmaalen_yt-tango

Postby Incompetence » 20 October 2018, 10:24

Protonoid wrote:--

you missed a big detail: the blue team is set to alpha team

OP, alpha isn't a multiplayer team. you shouldn't ever use it in multiplayer where there is more than one team since it's the only team option without player/NPC collision

also, don't have your wall placement like this. i was able to glitch through that by slipping in between the edges/corners that meet with each other. you also need to make your backgrounds go into walls so they don't create the glowing edge effect which is prominent
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Re: [MAP REQUEST] robloxplazmaalen_yt-tango

Postby MLG COOL DOMINIK » 20 October 2018, 11:26

Flaws:
Background is missing on some spots
Alpha team on blue
Can see outside of map, and probably also glitch out of it
No random weapons laying around, so no DM/TDM mode
As Incompetence said, DON'T place the walls like that
It would be at least nice to add more than 1 gun
Tunnel is still campable
No HE grenades to kill campers


Your map is not going to be played.
Nobody actually plays this game now, do they?
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Re: [MAP REQUEST] robloxplazmaalen_yt-tango

Postby Oriental » 20 October 2018, 15:27

is this sarcasm?
if you really want to get this map approved then
there are so many things you have to fix, goodluck.
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Re: [MAP REQUEST] robloxplazmaalen_yt-tango

Postby robloxplazmaalen_YT » 20 October 2018, 20:33

I'll try my best everyone!, thanks for some ideas! <3
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Re: [MAP REQUEST] robloxplazmaalen_yt-tango

Postby Protonoid » 21 October 2018, 11:25

TOPIC LOCKED
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