[APPROVAL REQUEST] Galeforce-at

[Galeforce]

[1]
- To the best of my knowledge, the following map fits all requirements to be approved: YES
- The following map contains no unfair hidden features: YES
- The following map contains nothing against the PB2 Code of Conduct: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Required Reading for posting a Map Approval Request: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Map Approval Rules: YES

[2]
- Map Name: Annihilation
- Map ID: Galeforce-at
- Link to Map Page: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m= ... &id=985070
- Link to Map Demo: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=galeforce-at

[3]
- Give a brief description of the map: A dm map where every player starts with a alien rifle and a alien shoutgun and a defibrillator, map also contains 4 alien sniper rifles with good cover for players to hide behind
- Why you think the map deserves to be approved: i think it should be approved because it is a very well designed map with good cover and also has a fun and thrilling battlefield
- Any other comments: this map was made with the help of Creeperhunter55 who helped me to improve the map to the current version. it is a map that is rated well by GP and CH55

[Build]

seems like your map got better, ofc CreeperHunter is a good map maker :)

do you really have to crouch over here?


i suggest lowering this down


This can be a problem, Even if there is a door to prevent it it still doesn't prevent the spray


also another thing i wanna mention, speed up the elevator.
it takes time for the player to wait for the elevator to open

[Galeforce]

i don't really see any issues here with the walls and the elevator and whats wrong with crouching to get pass

[Build]

i don't really see any issues here with the walls and the elevator and whats wrong with crouching to get pass

yeah sorry don't remove the walls that i've mentioned in the screenshot

i just don't like the way how u crouch there, some people might dislike especially with the door going up and down, crushing you

its my feedback

[Kiriakos Gr96]

The characters are way to separated especialy the civils

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The way how this works does not help at all the game make it open you are close it and then close if there is none near or remake the walls here in this place

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make this deeper or remove the water or it does not help in navigation

[Galeforce]

issues mentioned above fixed

[kubakuba]

https://prnt.sc/t4watz bad doors
https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m= ... &id=923515 here you can find good automatic doors.

[Galeforce]

fixed the doors

[kubakuba]

I don't sure
https://prnt.sc/t5iuuo
Try this
https://prnt.sc/t5ivp4
https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m= ... &id=923515

[Galeforce]

did the most basic trick in the book and fixed the issue with the doors,still no one told you to be standing under a door for more than enough time to get pass

[kubakuba]

On playtests, we agreed that the door is not suitable for the approved map, so you should change it.

[Galeforce]

which door

[kubakuba]

When the player stands in this region, player hear the door sounds all the time.
https://prnt.sc/t62wco
Why you don't want use doors by Jason Eden?

[Galeforce]

how about i remove the door would it help?

[kubakuba]

Everything to upgrade:
1.Replace the door with that made by Jason Eden
https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m= ... &id=923515

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2.Remove the door in the red region. Doors in the blue region replace (Use by Jason Eden)

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3.This area is unnecessary, please remove it

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[Kiriakos Gr96]

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This part here need to be changed
The way how it is now it possible to die from fall damage because the water area is not deep


Also the area are where the big teleport is needs to more deeper too

[Galeforce]

the door in the red region do i remove the door and put a wall over it or just leave it as it is without the door?


all the above mentioned issues have been fixed doors improved,area removed water depth increase hence removing chance of fall damage due to the water area

[kubakuba]

Nice
It remains to replace this door.
https://prnt.sc/t6d7yq
This timer is not needed
https://prnt.sc/t6d9nr

[Galeforce]

everything mentioned is done

[Stryde]

https://prnt.sc/takfn0 can easily camp here for whole match
another easy camp spot for whole match https://prnt.sc/takheo
one team spawns lower than the other team, giving one an advantage/the other a disadvantage
feels too big and has a lot of fall damage
some areas of map have very poor lighting
elevator too large and too slow, and also probably not synced to clientside
water too shallow: https://prnt.sc/takhqc
terrible lighting https://prnt.sc/taki0z
wrong wall texture https://prnt.sc/takifz