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CS-Laser Rifle

Postby Mean Me » 17 January 2018, 03:17

Second test. Burst rail rifle that scores moderately decent damage for a burst rifle. Link: https://imgur.com/LjYfoyk
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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby Moonhawk » 17 January 2018, 20:37

i don't understand, why does it look like you drew this during an earthquake?
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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby TerminatorRex » 17 January 2018, 21:02

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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby Mean Me » 18 January 2018, 00:27

Moonhawk wrote:i don't understand, why does it look like you drew this during an earthquake?

Excuse me? I mean, I didn't draw that bad, did I? If you actually mean that, I don't actually care :D
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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby Moonhawk » 18 January 2018, 01:31

Mean Me wrote:
Moonhawk wrote:i don't understand, why does it look like you drew this during an earthquake?

Excuse me? I mean, I didn't draw that bad, did I? If you actually mean that, I don't actually care :D

i didnt ask why to insult you, i asked why because it's not difficult to use a line tool.

honestly this just looks like a few scribbles that have been colored in.
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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby GhostX5 » 18 January 2018, 01:46

Moonhawk wrote:
Mean Me wrote:
Moonhawk wrote:i don't understand, why does it look like you drew this during an earthquake?

Excuse me? I mean, I didn't draw that bad, did I? If you actually mean that, I don't actually care :D

i didnt ask why to insult you, i asked why because it's not difficult to use a line tool.

honestly this just looks like a few scribbles that have been colored in.

I agree, not trying to insult, but the lines looked pretty crooked up. And the color scheme should like, be in a gun metal gray scheme, or something similar like the Assault Rifle CS-RC’s color scheme. Curious on what line tool you’re using, because it didn’t look like one you’ve used in this, perhaps you could’ve used the paint brush tool which might’ve explained this.
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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby Mean Me » 19 January 2018, 00:35

The color I used was just to create a bright weapon. Under these circumstances, I can use the heavy railgun as an example. But I will take your advice, and I'll try not to rush on this weapon. The editor I'm using is Pixlr, and with my shaky hands I'm using the pencil tool at size 10.
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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby Moonhawk » 19 January 2018, 01:20

Mean Me wrote:I just need some quick criticism for by improved version on your thoughts: https://imgur.com/UuYC5aA

the "lines" are still the main problem. use software such as gimp instead of pixlr, and use the line tool (or whatever it's called in gimp) instead of a brush tool.
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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby Mean Me » 19 January 2018, 01:31

That was exactly what I was thinking. I wasn't using the brush tool, it was a thick pencil tool.


I just need some quick criticism for by improved version on your thoughts: https://imgur.com/UuYC5aA
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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby Kostadin 8 » 19 January 2018, 03:45

yes your art would look better with better lines
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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby tehswordninja » 20 January 2018, 15:15

Please don't double post, Mean Me. I've merged your posts.
who needs a PB2.5 release date, anyways?
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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby Naitor » 28 January 2018, 22:10

You should put better lines, It would be better, Use paint
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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby Sniper J » 2 February 2018, 00:01

I don't understand what the black lines are, coming out the front of the gun.

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Re: CS-Laser Rifle

Postby halo 4 pro » 11 February 2018, 14:31

Did you use MS paint for this?

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