upsurpation long range weapon

[jeff the hacker]

http://orig15.deviantart.net/668c/f/2017/105/2/0/untitled_drawing_by_shadowguy7-db5wixe.png
apparently using mouse on a laggy windows was way harder that using fingers on a smartphone

name : alien sniper
damage : 360-420HP, headshot will double the damage ( splash damage 50-85HP )
accuracy : perfect
ammunition : 1 ammo per clip
rate of fire : super slow ( maybe 2 times slower than yippe-ki-yay! )
prenentation : none

description : power is the name of the game here. this sniper's projectile will explode when it hits the target or run out of hit points, dealing splash damage everywhere around the target. headshots can also do fatal damage.
sadly it can only hold 1 round per clip and reloading takes quite a while


note : sorry for crappy drawing, using mouse was harder than i thought

( if its approved, you can move it to the ideas section...i hope it gets approval )

EDIT : deviantart MURO is bugging right now http://prntscr.com/ex020c
what changes should i make?

[KARL SERG]

It bears a lot of similarity to the Raze 2 Sniper Rifle and Railgun. Also, it needs to be polished a bit. In its current state, it looks unfinished, but still eligible to be added to PB2,5 (if polished).

[WolfMaster12]

The design has strong references to Raze 2 guns .50 Cal Sniper and Railgun. I put low chances for it to be approved.

[jeff the hacker]

yeah is the raze 2 50 cal, i dont know what to make it different
but ill try ( i cant make it clean )

i think deviantart MURO is bugging now ill just post a screenshot at my post up there

[thetoppestkek]

The design of a breech loader sniper rifle is quite unique, but your example of it is terribly executed.

-The ergonomics are totally worth complaining about. The grip is alienating to a large hand, considering it's thick but extremely short, the scope is far too back and the stock is unusable for users with a taller height.

-It takes inspiration from certain Raze 2 weapons as stated above.

-It looks like it was drawn in MS Paint.

I would suggest you work on the ergonomics a bit more and also polish the design to look better.

[jeff the hacker]

The design of a breech loader sniper rifle is quite unique, but your example of it is terribly executed.

-The ergonomics are totally worth complaining about. The grip is alienating to a large hand, considering it's thick but extremely short, the scope is far too back and the stock is unusable for users with a taller height.

-It takes inspiration from certain Raze 2 weapons as stated above.

-It looks like it was drawn in MS Paint.

I would suggest you work on the ergonomics a bit more and also polish the design to look better.

im sorry but deviantart MURO was missing some tools that i need, so i guess this topic will be locked

[o_Sniper_o]

I don't know why people are saying its 'Inspired' by Raze 2 when its nearly an exact copy of one of the sniper rifles.

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[jeff the hacker]

I don't know why people are saying its 'Inspired' by Raze 2 when its nearly an exact copy of one of the sniper rifles.

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i like to play raze 2 alot before i was here and i like the appearance of the 50.cal
so they were right, the gun was inspired from a series that gone BAD thanks to raze 3

[KARL SERG]

I don't know why people are saying its 'Inspired' by Raze 2 when its nearly an exact copy of one of the sniper rifles.

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It looks like the Railgun a lot as well. That is why we didn't say it is a copy of the .50 Cal.

[GhostX5]

Well, here are some small changes you must make on your long range weapon:

- The stock is slightly short, might wanna extend it a little bit?
- The scope is too close, move it forward a bit, so it'll give a little awareness for the user.
- That colors are the exact ones for Advanced Usurper? If so, it's okay to leave it like that, it pretty much suits good.
- Make a color for that little black line underneath the red slit on the receiver of the gun, try making it green for like, it's loaded. Red is empty, while yellow is reloading.

- How come the weapon doesn't have the power to penetrate through walls? Try making it like this, it can penetrate through two walls, but it can be stopped after the third walls, compared to the CS-YippeeKiYay Sniper Rifle.
- Try making a cheek-rest on the stock, it gives a little comfort for the user while aiming and shooting.

That is all I could ever think of.

[monstarules]

Stealing the idea from Raze would definitely piss off AddisonR or JuiceTin and is not a smart idea, therefore this idea also wouldn't be considered. Ever. You also need to use proper shading, and an actual program other than MSPaint. Paint is good for making pixel art sprite stuff. Photoshop or Pixlr is better for making actual sprites for flash games. I don't have any of my work on these forums but gun designs I made have ended up in flash games.

[jeff the hacker]

drawing programs on a mouse or track pad just doesn't work, it really doesn't work, which really piss me off

http://www.plazmaburst2.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=136&t=19534
i finally used my imagination and should i lock this mess

[GhostX5]

Better lock it up buddy. It's literally not nice to steal AddisonR or JuiceTin's idea from a game, where it belongs.

And also, try not to make it look the same exact one from the game, try making it like, it's based off of the Sniper Rifle from Raze 2. Or inspired. My gun art is practically based off of the M20 PDW from Halo 5, which literally looks like the same copy as the gun, same colors, but different reloading type.

I prefer that the SMG should be reloaded like the way we reload our pistols and SMGs, e.g the H&K MP7 and the Steyr TMP. I haven't got any new painting program like Paint.NET or GIMP yet, thanks to my laptop being fried.