snipe the president (sniper rifle for terrorist faction)

[Terror Only]

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[thetoppestkek]

It looks good, but it could use some improvement:

1. The grip looks unholdable.
2. The trigger is missing.
3. There's no way in hell that there's an actual magazine to reload.
4. The exiting barrel is too short for a sniper rifle.
5. The scope looks a bit lengthy.
6. Draw a bipod attachment for realism (optional)
7. Use layers while drawing outlines and inside details.
8. Probably make the scope a little bit thicker.
9. Shade your weapons to give them more aesthetic appeal.

[Terror Only]

It looks good, but it could use some improvement: thanks

1. The grip looks unholdable. this is pb2. almost every in-game weapon looks unholdable
2. The trigger is missing. same as above^
3. There's no way in hell that there's an actual magazine to reload. there is. take a closer look
4. The exiting barrel is too short for a sniper rifle. future weapons are supposed to be high tech and not really supposed to have a long barrel like SVD's one for example
5. The scope looks a bit lengthy. okay
6. Draw a bipod attachment for realism (optional) it won't fit pb universe
7. Use layers while drawing outlines and inside details. yes yes, i know. i just had no time to finish the rifle
8. Probably make the scope a little bit thicker. maybe. maybe not
9. Shade your weapons to give them more aesthetic appeal.the most of in-game weapons do not have shading

[darkstar 1]

Looks cool, I hope Eric will add it in pb2.5/3

[tehswordninja]

The lack of any trigger area and the magazine's position makes me not really like it.

It looks interesting but needs a bit more polish imo.

Moving the magazine and giving it a handle would not only make it look better, it would also fit better in your 'terrorist faction'

[Kostadin 8]

Hmm it looks good but just make it better by making the scope slightly thinner, overall good 8/10

[DoomWrath]

I really like it, concerns such as the trigger can easily be fixed, plus the lack of cheek rest and eye relief (scope is too far back) are easy fixes. The rest of the proportions are correct, barrel length is easily long enough for a rifle of this type.

I've bodged this together with MS Paint to "fix" some of the issues, don't judge it artistically:



Of course being PB2, the small size of the guns means details like the actual trigger aren't super necessary, especially considering the character's hand covers that area anyway. Not including a space for a trigger/hand to even hold is a little too much in my opinion though, so that was changed.

[Terror Only]

that thing on the stock doesn't really belong to plazma burst universe or at least to this specified rifle. maybe a few changes would fix the issue. i like the new version of magazine

[Lightsaber70]

amazing rifle man .