Elite Unit "3" Full Body

[Failureguy]

I have not seen a character that has a shield, and of course it was not easy to make.

Hope you like it:

The shield looks like this from the back, I have not made a front view of the shield yet, and the character without shield:

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Link:
Deviant Art: http://failureguy1.deviantart.com/art/E ... 1474191062
TinyPic: http://i68.tinypic.com/r0rt3q.jpg

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Hmm, I feel the shield isn't drawn correctly for me. I like to ask your opinions on this. Thank you!
As for the poll, you can select two options since I asked two questions.

[Mhm]

Good job!

The character and the shield looks very cool.
I really like it!

[darkstar 1]

Lines are small and it is detailed too much to be pb2 fan art, but that doesn't mean it is bad... it is awesome

[Protonoid]

Awesome man! I think the shield be the same... It looks nice.. However, if the shield will be removed, it will automatically increase character's mobility which should be an option..

Details are bit faded tho.

[KARL SERG]

It is way too detailed in my opinion, and it wouldn't hurt if you would make your Art simpler IMO. I imagine it would be easier to make on your part.

The shield would be better-looking if it was bigger, but given the sheer amount of detail, simply enlarging it without any rework would suffice, I believe.

[Green Eyed Demon]

By far,you're the best character artist on this forum,can't say the same about the shield

[Terror Only]

the helmet looks awesome. shield is a good addition

calf needs more details. for now it's just black

what others have said - the artwork does not belong to this section as it doesn't fit pb2 style

overall body design could be better. the sword looks good and very practical for melee combat

7/10

[GhostX5]

That looks so amazing, man!

I guess that's what I think it's missing in PB Series, we need a character who would have to use a shield to be the point man of the team who is fierce about the protection.

Once he has his shield on, he would say "Stay behind me." or "Get behind me!" Would be a good feature to any character who is pulling out his or her own shield for protection or extra cover.

[Moonhawk]

I don't mind the detail, but yeah, it's way too much for PB2 or PB2.5. The design and the colour scheme doesn't really fit any character or faction well except maybe the Marine. The shield, eh, I don't like it that much to be honest.

It does remind me quite a bit of the main hero in Intrusion 2.

[artichokecat]

The detail may be a bit much but it's nice.
The shield reminds me of their usage in Garuda's story.
(Is that where you got the idea?)
Perhaps the skin could be used an an alternate or advanced version
of the Advanced Usurpation Soldier skin.

[Failureguy]

Good job!

The character and the shield looks very cool.
I really like it!

Glad you like it!

Lines are small and it is detailed too much to be pb2 fan art, but that doesn't mean it is bad... it is awesome

Uhhh yeah, I just realized I overdid it, no matter, it still looks good doesn't it?

Awesome man! I think the shield be the same... It looks nice.. However, if the shield will be removed, it will automatically increase character's mobility which should be an option..

Details are bit faded tho.

For that, I was trying to come up with an animation of the shield being able to retract it self and make it turn into a throwing circular-shape saw.

Another method for that was to make the shield turn into a temporary defense front, that way the soldier doesn't have to always carry the shield causing trouble, a way to show you:

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It is way too detailed in my opinion, and it wouldn't hurt if you would make your Art simpler IMO. I imagine it would be easier to make on your part.

The shield would be better-looking if it was bigger, but given the sheer amount of detail, simply enlarging it without any rework would suffice, I believe.

What I said with darkstar, I overdid it. But well, I guess this could show what it could be if it were in PB2 version.

As for the shield, like this?:

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By far,you're the best character artist on this forum,can't say the same about the shield

I can't say that for sure but, thanks a lot! Glad you like it.

the helmet looks awesome. shield is a good addition

calf needs more details. for now it's just black

what others have said - the artwork does not belong to this section as it doesn't fit pb2 style

overall body design could be better. the sword looks good and very practical for melee combat

7/10

Hmm, that's kinda bad if it really doesn't belong to this section. As for the color scheme since it's black, I tested other colors to match with the character itself, however as it seems, it doesn't sit right for me after all.

The sword was actually half baton half sword (I actually wanna put the name as police force, but that seems a bit out of place for PB2.). Noted, thanks for the feedback!

That looks so amazing, man!

I guess that's what I think it's missing in PB Series, we need a character who would have to use a shield to be the point man of the team who is fierce about the protection.

Once he has his shield on, he would say "Stay behind me." or "Get behind me!" Would be a good feature to any character who is pulling out his or her own shield for protection or extra cover.

One would think about now as to how they defend themselves if it is to save yourself out of bullet hell.
Glad you like it!

I don't mind the detail, but yeah, it's way too much for PB2 or PB2.5. The design and the colour scheme doesn't really fit any character or faction well except maybe the Marine. The shield, eh, I don't like it that much to be honest.

It does remind me quite a bit of the main hero in Intrusion 2.

To be honest, all of the characters I made so far are related to special forces (Not related to CS or marine whatsoever, just a fiction group I created to imagine what if they were in the game itself), therefore resulting not really fitting into any factions.

Color scheme wise, like I said with Terror Only, I feel like it doesn't sit right with me if I went for other colors. I could try but my vision for the character was like a police (The sword was like a hint itself)
I saw someone said my other character looked like intrusion 1, oh gawd i never played that game.

The detail may be a bit much but it's nice.
The shield reminds me of their usage in Garuda's story.
(Is that where you got the idea?)
Perhaps the skin could be used an an alternate or advanced version
of the Advanced Usurpation Soldier skin.

I didn't read Garuda's/Hikarikaze's story since I didn't have the feel to read it, guess I'll have to read it soon.
Detail wise, I know.
I like to think of it as a defense unit for this character, oh well. Glad you like it.

[monkeyman2535]

the helmet looks awesome. shield is a good addition

calf needs more details. for now it's just black

what others have said - the artwork does not belong to this section as it doesn't fit pb2 style

overall body design could be better. the sword looks good and very practical for melee combat

7/10

Slow up there a sec, buckaroo.

I'd really like to see you do something that's a tenth as good as this before you slap it with "7/10 it's ok". What criticism you try to offer here is extremely weak and you seem to have no intention of explaining why you're giving this piece such a lukewarm reception. First you demand more detail on the only non-detailed part, then you immediately say that this piece is too detailed to be PB2 fan art, which is frankly ridiculous because you're allowed to post any PB2 related art here regardless of style. Then you give the exceptionally weak critique that the body "could be better". What are you even trying to say? Right now you just come across as bitter and jealous. You should be on your knees thanking Failureguy for being one of the last good content creators on this forum.

[KARL SERG]

the helmet looks awesome. shield is a good addition

calf needs more details. for now it's just black

what others have said - the artwork does not belong to this section as it doesn't fit pb2 style

overall body design could be better. the sword looks good and very practical for melee combat

7/10

Slow up there a sec, buckaroo.

-long critical text-

This is going to be funny and will not change him directly one bit. If you feel like trying to correct him, I suggest using the PM. Trying to humiliate him in the open is not going to help. You should have learned it thus far.

It is way too detailed in my opinion, and it wouldn't hurt if you would make your Art simpler IMO. I imagine it would be easier to make on your part.

The shield would be better-looking if it was bigger, but given the sheer amount of detail, simply enlarging it without any rework would suffice, I believe.

What I said with darkstar, I overdid it. But well, I guess this could show what it could be if it were in PB2 version.

As for the shield, like this?:

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Yes, that should do. It might look big to some, but its main purpose is to protect.

[Hikarikaze]

Looks really nice, the colors you used fit well but then again, I'm always biased towards the red/white/black color scheme. My only issue is that the body proportions seem to be a little off, but that's probably just me and the bulkiness of the character's armor giving that effect

Also, to everyone saying that this doesn't belong in the PB2 art section because it doesn't fit the style, the concept and idea is still allowed in the section. I've yet to see the same people state the same thing when others post MS Paint-esque garbage here let alone sub-par works of "art." The fact people are saying this here but not anywhere else makes absolutely no sense.

[guest-electric fish]

well pretty and awesome job you did with that drawing.

[Terror Only]

Slow up there a sec, buckaroo.

I'd really like to see you do something that's a tenth as good as this before you slap it with "7/10 it's ok".

browse fan art section, dummy

[Failureguy]

the helmet looks awesome. shield is a good addition

calf needs more details. for now it's just black

what others have said - the artwork does not belong to this section as it doesn't fit pb2 style

overall body design could be better. the sword looks good and very practical for melee combat

7/10

Slow up there a sec, buckaroo.

I'd really like to see you do something that's a tenth as good as this before you slap it with "7/10 it's ok". What criticism you try to offer here is extremely weak and you seem to have no intention of explaining why you're giving this piece such a lukewarm reception. First you demand more detail on the only non-detailed part, then you immediately say that this piece is too detailed to be PB2 fan art, which is frankly ridiculous because you're allowed to post any PB2 related art here regardless of style. Then you give the exceptionally weak critique that the body "could be better". What are you even trying to say? Right now you just come across as bitter and jealous. You should be on your knees thanking Failureguy for being one of the last good content creators on this forum.

It's fine, like what Karl said, it's not gonna change him regardless. It's the thought that counts for me that I appreciate other people posting relating about my fanart.

Yes, that should do. It might look big to some, but its main purpose is to protect.

Noted. Thanks for the help!

Looks really nice, the colors you used fit well but then again, I'm always biased towards the red/white/black color scheme. My only issue is that the body proportions seem to be a little off, but that's probably just me and the bulkiness of the character's armor giving that effect

Also, to everyone saying that this doesn't belong in the PB2 art section because it doesn't fit the style, the concept and idea is still allowed in the section. I've yet to see the same people state the same thing when others post MS Paint-esque garbage here let alone sub-par works of "art." The fact people are saying this here but not anywhere else makes absolutely no sense.

Ahaha, I'm pretty sure the bulkiness is to show that the character is buff and strong, and that it also shows that it has a good protection against anything (I'm taking a little bit from Heavy Suit Marine).

well pretty and awesome job you did with that drawing.

Glad you like it!

[monkeyman2535]

Slow up there a sec, buckaroo.

I'd really like to see you do something that's a tenth as good as this before you slap it with "7/10 it's ok".

browse fan art section, dummy

Not even a tenth as good, dummy, but I appreciate the effort.

[Terror Only]

Slow up there a sec, buckaroo.

I'd really like to see you do something that's a tenth as good as this before you slap it with "7/10 it's ok". What criticism you try to offer here is extremely weak and you seem to have no intention of explaining why you're giving this piece such a lukewarm reception. First you demand more detail on the only non-detailed part, then you immediately say that this piece is too detailed to be PB2 fan art, which is frankly ridiculous because you're allowed to post any PB2 related art here regardless of style. Then you give the exceptionally weak critique that the body "could be better". What are you even trying to say? Right now you just come across as bitter and jealous. You should be on your knees thanking Failureguy for being one of the last good content creators on this forum.

ok, let's make a list:
1) about my art not even being a tenth as good as failureguy's. this is plazmaburst2, i draw weapons and armors that can be put into the game right after i posted them on the forum, you cannot just give that talent less than 1/10 rating. you can check this topic for example ( viewtopic.php?f=136&t=17805 ), obviously it doesn't have that amount of details that FG's skin has, but adding more details would make the skin not fitting into pb2/pb3 art style hence why it would make it worse.

2) "u cannot give it 7/10 if you aren't an artist and if your arts aren't better than his" - monkeyman2545. following your logic you cannot rate the "Avatar" movie if you haven't made "Titanic". this is not how the world works. you don't have to make music to rate music, you don't have to make movies to rate other movies.

Not even a tenth as good, dummy, but I appreciate the effort.

how ironic it is that a guy who hasn't done a single drawing gives my art 0/10

3) about my criticizm on FG's skin. when i firstly saw it i've jumped into conclusion that it doesn't fit pb2 nor pb3 art style and maybe it wasn't even meant to. maybe FG wanted to add more details into the skin to make it look better, make it look more realistic maybe? so if you take a closer look you can notice that:

calf needs more details. for now it's just black

so, what does it mean?

body design could be better.

now shut your mouth and quit going offtopic. people like you always cause flamewars on these forums

[monkeyman2535]

now shut your mouth and quit going offtopic. people like you always cause flamewars on these forums

ohh boio u really hurt my feels real good