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New Topic (gun)

Postby The Shadow Fighter » 12 March 2016, 15:14


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Re: New Topic (gun)

Postby darkstar 1 » 12 March 2016, 15:50

Positive points:
1: The disigns looks better than your previous ones

Negative points:
1: Rifle is written with one f
2: The yellow colour of the last gun is a bit too flashy
3: As KLM sayd, too much wobbly lines

I give it a 7.12568125/10



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Re: New Topic (gun)

Postby BloodShed04 » 12 March 2016, 15:56

Guns look like they are made out of tortoise shells and bucket filled with grey.

You would break your hands if you tried holding the Heavy Rifle.

Machine Gun grip looks lanky af.

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Re: New Topic (gun)

Postby Martin The Wolf » 12 March 2016, 16:35

Very blurry and very what the fuk.
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Re: New Topic (gun)

Postby shadowstorm122 » 12 March 2016, 18:00

Atleast you're making them look like guns now.
Next time don't use as many lines.
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Re: New Topic (gun)

Postby Civil-Lite » 13 March 2016, 17:53

Heres some positives and negatives from me:

Positive:
Tbh I think the sniper is kinda good.
Try make them a bit bigger.

Negative:
Too many lines in the guns.
Bit too darkish colours.
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Re: New Topic (gun)

Postby Krutz » 16 March 2016, 20:24

they look like puzzles

they dont look too good

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