CS-24THG (Riffle)

[The Shadow Fighter]

All these days i was working about this one:
http://www.4gp.tw/ba3u/1456415739373.jpg

[Martin The Wolf]

You took so long on thing?
I think this could have been made in less then half an hoour. Anyway, looks WAY BETTER than your previous art works. 8/10. Although how do you hold it and the stock looks uncomfortable.

[Martin The Wolf]

I think the time was the amount of time it took him to learn how to make things look much better.

Makes sense.

[tehswordninja]

Looks pretty good, other than what others have mentioned, the stock.

A simple change to it so that would be easier to hold and I think it would fit in quite well.
Perhaps you should give stats or a rough idea of how the weapon would work, its lore, etc

[shadowstorm122]

You've done well on this but its not quite a rifle yet research a few guns, look at the shape they have and you'll be doing good(Deviantart has lots of weapons you could use for inspiration)
Keep up the good work.

[Hikarikaze]

The stock isn't necessarily the problem with this gun, it's simply the fact that there's literally no possible way to hold it properly. It's like trying to hold a .50 BMG Desert Eagle (which is a thing, believe it or not): you simply can't hold it easily.

Though of course, that can be said about nearly every single gun in PB2, except they at least have some method of holding the weapon like a pistol grip, comfortable or not. That's one minor detail that you definitely don't want to ignore when you're making weapons like these. Try to incorporate an element of realism - be it entirely or to an extent.

[thinhvippro9]

"All these days i was working about this one"

Lol seriously?It takes me 3 hours drawing the "new character" one

[Martin The Wolf]

"All these days i was working about this one"

Lol seriously?It takes me 3 hours drawing the "new character" one

If you haven't noticed he just started less than 2 weeks ago.

[Civil-Lite]

Looks good, but also sorta small. Though I am suprised you took like so many days just to make that... really? But still, I think its pretty nice. Well done.