My first shotgun

[David91523]

My first combat shotgun

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what do you think about this art?

[GhostX5]

Not bad, but the colors are not well suited for this weapon. Is that a olive green laser pointer on the shotgun? Doesn't really suit the weapon well, because you made the laser pointer a bit darker, and it's gonna be hard for some users to see their laser pointer on something they're aiming at, especially when they're in a dark place.

Check out the Assault Rifle CS-RC's laser pointer and it's colors. The laser pointer is a little bit bright, so you can see it clearly and better rather than a darkened laser pointer. For the magazine, it's colored a bit darker so it would suit it's real life counter part of the real weapon H&K XM8.



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[tehswordninja]

Looks like a CS-DAZ that's missing features and has a laser sight.

I'd suggest trying to be a bit more unique, and making sure not to leave parts of guns out, the weapon looks quite awkward without a pump. If you were going for a semi auto, it might have been wise to add a magazine.

[Ahrora]

For your first gun its pretty good although I think you should have made the lines longer, and change the laser color to red.