Weapon Pack #1

[TheGhostSniper]

Alright, so I have made some weapons. Some of you might actually know these, since I have posted them in the chat a lot of times, but I'm still posting them here for people to see.

Lite Assault Rifle C-02ar

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Lite Assault Rifle C-02ar http://prntscr.com/a4h79g
Description: An assault rifle designed for frontline uses. Used by Civil Security Bosses, Falkoks and the Correction Nine.
RoF (Rate Of Fire): Same as the Assault Rifle CS-RC
Accuracy: Same as the Alien Rifle.
Style: Automatic.
Magazine size (If applicable): 30.
DPS (Damage Per Shot): Values from 12.2 to 14.5 without upgrades. With upgrade level 1 damage values from 14.5 to 17.4, with upgrade level 2 damage values from 17.4 to 19.2, with upgrade level 3 damage values from 19.2 to 21.2.

Sniper Rifle CS DM-R92 (Alpha 7, you may know this as the cardboard sniper rifle. xDD)

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Sniper Rifle CS DM-R92 http://prnt.sc/aaalhv
Description: A sniper rifle that was made as a mix of a lite railgun, the Sniper Rifle CS-YippeKiYay, and burst fire weapons. Expect that this sniper rifle will leave you without hands, head or legs.
RS (Reload Speed): 3.4 seconds.
Accuracy: Same as the lite railgun.
Projectiles: Railgun projectiles.
Style: Burst fire. (When the trigger is pulled, it will fire 3 projectiles.)
Magazine size (If applicable): 12.
DPS (Damage Per Shot): Values from 24.5 to 27.2 per shot without upgrades. With upgrade level 1 damage values from 27.2 to 34.1 per shot. With upgrade level 2 damage values from 34.1 to 35.6 per shot. With upgrade level 3 damage values from 35.6 to 39.9 per shot.

Battle Rifle CS 092-TC0

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Battle Rifle CS 092-TC0 http://prnt.sc/ad1gm6
Description: A battle rifle made for CQC uses. Used by Civil Security Lites, Civil Security Heavies and Civil Security Ghosts.
RoF (Rate Of Fire): Same as the Ray Rifle TCoRR.
Accuracy: Same as the Assault Rifle C-01r.
Magazine size (If applicable): 36.
Projectiles: Same as the CS-RC.
Style: Automatic. Can be changed into 5-shot Burst fire through use of the right mouse click.
DPS (Damage Per Shot): Values from 12.3 to 14.3 without upgrades (Burst values from 15.3 to 17.2). With upgrade level 1 damage values from 14.3 to 16.4 (Burst values from 17.2 to 19.6), with upgrade level 2 damage values from 16.4 to 18.9 (Burst values from 19.6 to 23.2), with upgrade level 3 damage values from 18.9 to 20.2 (Burst values from 19.6 to 22.1).
Fun Facts: This weapon was inspired and based on by the Crossbolt NERF blaster, which I used to play with a lot during my childhood.

[shadowstorm122]

I remember you showing these a few weeks ago good job but i think you need to work on the style a bit.

[Hikarikaze]

They look alright, but some things don't look right or just look plain awkward to me. I'll explain further below.

The assault rifle's nice and it obviously gives off the XM8 vibe with the front end and carrying handle, but the magazine and trigger guard both look tacked on, especially since there's an unusual gap between the two. The gap should be more narrow. The stock also looks sharp, and therefore, uncomfortable. This is what I'm talking about ( http://prntscr.com/ablf3g ). What I suggest is some sort of cheek rest that goes from that end of the stock to the carrying handle, like this ( http://prntscr.com/ablfn0 ). That being said, the rest looks nice as said before.

The cardboard sniper rifle addresses the problem of the tacked on trigger guard but there's an unnecessarily excessive gap between it and the magazine as well for this. I'm personally not a fan of the pistol grip and I personally think it should be straighter for this weapon specifically. I also am not a fan of the stock; I can't imagine anyone holding the sniper rifle properly when the cheek rest is a long distance away from the scope. My suggestion is to make the cheek rest longer or move the scope back some more.

[Martin The Wolf]

Did I go color blind or is there no color. If it is door number 2 add some color. You barely even did shading wtf. The grip looks uncomfortable and I can barely even see what is going on.

[TheGhostSniper]

Did I go color blind or is there no color. If it is door number 2 add some color. You barely even did shading wtf. The grip looks uncomfortable and I can barely even see what is going on.

1) Which gun are you talking about?
2) Give some constructive criticism and feedback and tell me what to change, instead of talking full out negative about what I made, okay?

Also, the cardboard sniper rifle might look a bit weird, because I was experimenting with different grips, a different style of gun, etc.

[Rekkless]

I remember seeing you drawing these at home, lol.
Anyways, the first gun is clearly based on the Assault Rifle CS-RC. As @Hikarikaze said, the stock needs to look less sharper to make it more comfortable for the user. Try moving the clips and the laser sight closer to the grip of the rifle.
About the cardboard sniper rifle, I don't like the pistol grip. Try a Dragunov SVD grip or an assault rifle grip.
Move the grip farther away from the stock and move it closer to the magazine and laser sight.
There's nothing wrong with the battle rifle, just do some work in the shading. It looks a bit ugly, maybe try to make the shading lighter?

[Hikarikaze]

Try moving the clips and the laser sight closer to the grip of the rifle.

The laser sight isn't necessarily at an incorrect position. It's fine where it is.

Since the OP seems to be edited, I'll note down some things for the battle rifle.

First of all, it looks nice with the F2000 + G36 + Korobov combination going on. However, for realism's sake, I suggest you move these vents somewhere to the front end of the gun, draw a bolt underneath these vents, or simply cover them up ( http://prntscr.com/aclbui ), since there has to be some sort of bolt mechanism right there.

In regards to the shading however, keep in mind there's multiple kinds of shading that create different kinds of effects. I'll use screenshots from PMG as an example of what surfaces would actually look like with certain types of shading. Front indicates what the shading actually looks like on a 2-dimensional surface while side indicates what the actual surface would look like if it was 3-dimensional and faced to the side: http://prntscr.com/aclao7

There's another kind of shading but unfortunately I can't replicate it easily, but it's essentially just a rounded version of the first one, instead of sharp slopes.

[TheGhostSniper]

First of all, it looks nice with the F2000 + G36 + Korobov combination going on. However, for realism's sake, I suggest you move these vents somewhere to the front end of the gun, draw a bolt underneath these vents, or simply cover them up ( http://prntscr.com/aclbui ), since there has to be some sort of bolt mechanism right there.

Does this look better? http://prnt.sc/ad1gm6
If it does I will update the OP again.

OFFTOPIC: Hikarikaze was the only one who realised the F2000 + G36 + Korobov combination. "It's a unique combination" <--- as stated by my cousin.

[Hikarikaze]

Does this look better? http://prnt.sc/ad1gm6
If it does I will update the OP again.

Yeah, it looks much better. As long as there isn't empty space there, it's fine.