Cps Map [For Approval]

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Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby CaptainSolo » 29 October 2016, 11:26

Map name: ~:CPS:~
Map ID: captainsolo-cps
Map description: New adds in the map
~ Added 3 granades, and 2 port nades
~ Added gun 9
~ Added some more blocks
~ Detailed the map
Please, rate the map, I'm really trying to make this map approved.
Map Page Link: http://plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=capta ... &id=775798
Map Demo Link: http://plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=captainsolo-cps

Well, I really tried my best doing the map. Thanks to iDomino, it really became awesome map. As I wrote, I tried my best doing the map, so I'd like the map to become approved. It meets every requirement, and I think its perfect fresh new map. Please, check it, and leave a comment about it!
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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby iDomino » 29 October 2016, 11:28

@Eric Gurt @Staff cmon approve this right now. jk


Good map
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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby Kostadin 8 » 29 October 2016, 11:29

dis map is gucci should be approved
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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby K2Shape » 29 October 2016, 11:30

Its 1 map 4 you
2 gud 4 me
3 lines 4 you
4ree posting 4 me
5 stars 4 you!

But lets get serious, its a gud map overall.
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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby Reflect » 29 October 2016, 11:40

Its a really good map , I would like to see it in approved maps.

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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby S0RA » 29 October 2016, 13:35

Yes please,i want dis approved.
would be cool!
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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby Terror Only » 29 October 2016, 15:48

the only good thing about this map is how you used the shadowmapsize mark and gave this map some unusual look. the rest of the map is just a bunch of thin and ugly looking wall structures. other good thing may be the spawn point, using a lot of colored doors underneath the spawn gives it some uniqueness.

the top left tunnel's pusher should harm the stability of the characters stepping into it otherwise they can get outside of the map. also you can see that tunnel terminates in a conspicuous place. makes the map look unfinished. you should extend the length of this tunnel

3* really, could be 4 or 5 if the wall placement was better. not worth being approved, i don't get why do you call this "perfect fresh new map". and also i don't get why the posters above are yelling "APPROVE IT" with no fair reason

if im not mistaken using such hardcore shadowmasize parameter makes the map really laggy in multiplayer (if you set the display quality to high ofc). have you tested it?
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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby PowerGamer » 29 October 2016, 16:41

I don't really have lagg. Yes, I tested it, thanks for telling me about the pusher. In my opinion the map is not that bad, I mean, it's original. I might work some more on it.

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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby CaptainSolo » 29 October 2016, 16:42

Oops, I commented with my alt. As I said, I'll improve some things.

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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby Terror Only » 29 October 2016, 17:01

if you want add more uniqeness try adding a door with unusual opening/closing system(not just one gray door going up and down. also try adding complex asymmetrical wall constructions. for now they are too blocky. those thin climbing walls better be removed too

and as i said the only original thing is the lighting. everything else isn't original at all
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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby CaptainSolo » 29 October 2016, 18:55

It's original, imo. I uptaded it, check it. I'm sure u will like it now.
Can the admins write their opinions too?

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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby Terror Only » 29 October 2016, 19:05

CaptainSolo wrote:It's original, imo. I uptaded it, check it. I'm sure u will like it now.
Can the admins write their opinions too?

[sarcasm]ye, because their opinion is a lot more important[/sarcasm]

anyway, the map is not published
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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby CaptainSolo » 29 October 2016, 21:41

It's published now.
You can check it, I think it's awesome map. Do you have any other feedbacks?

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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby o_Sniper_o » 29 October 2016, 22:03

[0/10] Overall: Won't be leaving a full review for this map because its not worth my time; too many beginner mistakes.

Take a look in the tutorials section to get started on the basics. Also don't ask for your map to be approved, ESPECIALLY if its your first map.

EDIT: Forgot to leave a rating.
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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby supertramp » 30 October 2016, 02:34

In Approval Guide it's said do not make over bright area or something like that. I saw over bright areas in ur map
The shadow map size is good. There's no rule about it.
Maybe you need to change the lamps to default power 0.4

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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby CaptainSolo » 1 November 2016, 19:00

I fixed the lights. Added more detailed background, I won't change the design itself, because it's my design, I didn't copy and stuff. I tried to make the background a little bit more detailed.

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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby lee06400 » 1 November 2016, 20:48

This map misses a lot of points from approval guide, I don't know how you can state it's meant to be approved as you obviously didn't read it.
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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby CaptainSolo » 3 November 2016, 15:33

Could you tell me wich of those points do I miss?

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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby Alex2002 » 3 November 2016, 15:56

Nothing really wrong with the map, but the only thing that concerns me is that the map is too big.

9/10

Rated 4
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Re: Cps Map [For Approval]

Postby CaptainSolo » 3 November 2016, 16:09

It's arena map. It should be big. Thanks for the support. ^-^
As always Lee is rage voting, I don't know how much should take to the staff to realize that he rage vote on every map, without a reason. I don't really care about it, I just really want this map to be approved. I think it's perfect for it.

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