Vampire / A New Beginning (Updatedx3)

[david782]

Please feel free to give me any ideas on how I can improve these maps.
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(This map has been published and I hope has been improved.)
Map name: Vampire Part 1 [SP]
Map ID: david782-vampire part 1
Map description: This is the story of Dracula (aka The Count) We meet with Dracula on his way to get back to his home town. Where he encounters three werewolves and goes on to the next stage in his journey.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... 20part%201
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%201
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(This map has been published and I hope has been improved.)
[/i][/b]Map name: Vampire Part 2 [SP]
Map ID: david782-vampire part 2
Map description: You find out that those 3 lone wolves where scouts for a bigger pack of werewolves and that it takes cunning and some trickery to kill them.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... 20part%202
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%202
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(This map has been published and I hope has been improved.)
Map name: Vampire Part 3 [SP]
Map ID: david782-vampire part 3
Map Description: Dracula is now coming closer and closer to his village, he is now almost half way finished with his journey to get back to his village.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... 20part%203
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%203
(Due to the map below being under construction you will be redirected to part 5.)
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(This map is Undergoing Construction.)
Map name: Vampire Part 4 [SP]
Map ID: david782-vampire part 4
Map description: They set out in a forest ruled by the werewolves and meet up with some more vampires. It takes awhile for them to get where they are now and are very tried form traveling all night.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... 20part%204
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%204
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Map Name: Vampire Part 5 [SP]
Map ID: david782-vampire part 5
Map Description: They are now half way done with their journey and encounter more Werewolves as they continue their quest.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... &id=587377
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%205
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Map Name: Vampire Part 6 [SP]
Map ID: david782-vampire part 6
Map Description: Draculas and his friends are separated and his friends are captured by Werewolves and Dracula has to find them and rescue them from the Werewolves.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... &id=587387
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%206
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Map Name: Vampire Part 7 [SP]
Map ID: david782-vampire part 7
Map Description: Dracula encounters many different werewolves from pups to good werewolves to the evilest werewolves of all but in this forest they encounter evil wolf pups and many of their fathers. Who are enraged that Dracula and his team have slayed them all on their journey to Draculas home town.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... &id=587700
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%207
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Map Name: Vampire Part 8 [SP]
Map ID: david782-vampire part 8
Map Description: Dracula is now traveling with 5 of his closets friends: Medusa, Werewolf, James, Bill, and Blake. They are traveling through a desert and are ambushed by the desert werewolves.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... &id=587928
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%208
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Map Name: Vampire Part 9 [SP]
Map ID: david782-vampire part 9
Map Description: They come to Draculas home and find it in ruins! Dracula is devastated that all his closest friends and family are now dead and he seeks vengeance of the ultimate type.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... 20part%209
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%209
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Map Name: Vampire Part 10 [SP]
Map ID: david782-vampire part 10
Map Description: Dracula is now facing his most feared enemy he is feared by the Werewolves and the Vampires. He is the Werewolf King himself and it takes all of Draculas friends to defeat him.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... 0part%2010
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 0part%2010

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Map Name: A New Beginning
Map ID: david782-a new beginning
Map Description: We have left Dracula at the end of his journey... or so we thought. Now he has a new quest to fulfill and Dracula has to over come many more obstacles then he has ever before in this "New Beginning".
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... 0beginning
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 0beginning
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Map Name: A New Beginning part 2
Map ID: david782-anb part 2
Map Description: Dracula is now in a sacred forest and is ambushed by ghostly spirits of the fallen. He has to somehow get out of the forest and by a miracle survive the experience of the dead. Draculas only weapon is a grenade launcher will he survive the experience? lets find out.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... 20part%202
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%202
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Map Name: A New Beginning part 3
Map ID: david782-anb part 3
Map Description: Dracula has found his way out of the scared forest and is now being attacked by his own kind the Vampires are against Dracula becoming king once again because they fear he will cause chaos to spread across the entire world.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... 20part%203
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%203
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Map Name: A New Beginning part 4
Map ID: david782-anb part 4
Map Description: Dracula is now fighting for his life against Werewolves and Vampires working together to stop him, the only way he could survive is by being very smart and very strong against his new found enemies.
Map Page Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=d ... 20part%204
Map Demo Link: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=da ... 20part%204
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Map Name: A New Beginning part 5
Map ID: david782-anb part 5
Map Description: Dracula meets up with a strange human being and has to team up with him to help rule his kingdom once again.
Map Page Link: http://plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=david ... 20part%205
Map Demo Link: http://plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=david7 ... 20part%205
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Map Name: A New Beginning part 6
Map ID: david782-anb part 6
Map Description: Dracula isnt to sure if he should trust the "Human" or not. The "Human" has made some questionable choices and some great choices, too, but ... is he trustworthy?
You will be playing as the "Human" in this next game to see if he is trustworthy or not
Map Page Link: http://plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=david ... 20part%206
Map Demo Link: http://plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=david7 ... 20part%206
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Map Name: A New Beginning part 7
Map ID: david782-anb part 7
Map Description: Dracula and Unknown are now traveling through the night to the nearest Train Station and are now trying to get to the outer edges of Draculas Castle in Transylvania.
Map Page Link: http://plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=david ... 20part%207
Map Demo Link: http://plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=david7 ... 20part%207
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Map Name: A New Beginning part 8
Map ID: david782-anb part 8
Map Description: As Dracula and Unknown start making more and more progress towards Draculas Castle, they begin to notice a rise in Vampire and Werewolf activity.
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And Yet when they get to Draculas Castle they notice that its been completely over run by WereWolves.
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Part 9 will come out at 25 votes.
Map Page Link: http://plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m=david ... 20part%208
Map Demo Link: http://plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=david7 ... 20part%208
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[Civil-Lite]

Ok heres a quick suggestion, Re-Edit that post and put it all in the spoiler.

In other words, Nice Maps!

[yi en]

here you are. these are my review. (part 1)
(part 2)

[david782]

The Vampire SP Series was created when I was still learning how to create maps over the course of the Vampire Series I had developed my map making "skills" in the A New Beginning SP Series I believe I have improved greatly since my first try at creating a SP Series.

[Wardemption]

Well, good series but sadly I can't rate because I reseted my kills.

[yi en]

The Vampire SP Series was created when I was still learning how to create maps over the course of the Vampire Series I had developed my map making "skills" in the A New Beginning SP Series I believe I have improved greatly since my first try at creating a SP Series.

yep at the "a new beginning" you will see I have detuct the sins since you are a newbie map developer. the the sin are lesser and lesser. Good Job actually.

[david782]

Thank you all for the feed back I will be working on the series accordingly to what yi en has posted and I hope that it will greatly improve my maps.

[eternal titan]

Hurried map series. What's the actual story? A dracula finding some friends out of now where?

[david782]

Hurried map series. What's the actual story? A dracula finding some friends out of now where?

How would you like me to improve on the series Eternal?
Yi en how long would you like the first 3 parts in the Vampire series to be?

[yi en]

First,don't double post.
Second,based on the part,if you want to keep your first 3 parts,put the originally 3 parts compress into part 3,the the first two parts can describe prologue (how does Dracula know werewolves take over his village?)(how does they become enemies.)

That's all.

[Alica]

don't double post.

Yeah.
If you have got something to add and there is already the latest post of you, hit the edit button and add it.

[eternal titan]

How would you like me to improve on the series Eternal?

Add a story line.

[david782]

How would you like me to improve on the series Eternal?

Add a story line.

What exactly do you mean by add a story line?