by Supah Flash » 14 June 2018, 02:59
Ayo,
these are my thoughts and opinions when observing each weapon. Overall, it's great but a few touches could be added. Hope you would understand:
Advanced Alien Heater- seems too similar to original alien heaters, but you did create the prototype models; I envision it as a cross-breed between the CS Heavy Railgun and first alien heater models.
Alien Heater Minigun- resembles somewhat similarity of Ray Rifle TcORR
Alien Auto Heater- Creative design concept; I'd recommend the right side for both because the left lacks detail beyond the dot circle. There should be only one handle (near the Biohazard symbol) right-side up.
Alien SMG- The design concept is futuristically accurate; I'm not too sure where the magazine is sent.
Usurpers Defibrillators: The wire lines out front shouldn't be black; I recommend blue/red since it's not man-made. Other than that, great concept.
Alien Grenades- The Falkok shape glow should be a little more jagged; the Usurpers shape should be rather elliptical because their style is rather smooth.
Falkok Defibrillators: Again, I'd only change the black lines with like a blue/white wires. Other than that, it's good.
Firebird: I simply like the design the way it is; excellent work.
Gravy Rocket Launcher: Unique concept. Wouldn't make the muzzle area so wide in length for a projectile this small. I also suggest for there to be, at max, 2 rocket projectiles firing at once.
Psi Cutter: Another innovative weapon; not sure how the bullet projectile would spawn once the gun is fired whether it's positioned behind or in front of the gun. You'll have to discuss that with Eric Gurt.
Impulse Cannon: Too confused where the muzzle of the gun is at; there's too much glowing and I don't understand why there would be lines if the weapon is supposed to be carried by a vehicle; a special design though.
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