[APPROVAL REQUEST] zibuya-energy

[APPROVAL REQUEST] zibuya-energy

Postby Zibuya » 3 October 2020, 17:50

[1]
- To the best of my knowledge, the following map fits all requirements to be approved: YES
- The following map contains no unfair hidden features: YES
- The following map contains nothing against the PB2 Code of Conduct: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Required Reading for posting a Map Approval Request: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Map Approval Rules: YES

[2]
- Map Name: Energy
- Map ID: zibuya-energy
- Link to Map Page: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/index.php?s=9&m=zibuya-energy
- Link to Map Demo: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=zibuya-energy

[3]
- Give a brief description of the map:

Lore: The Usurpations built an energy factory, that transmits light and converts it into pure energy by pumping the energy through pipes which saves
more energy and power up the Usurpation Civilization. As the lights get converted into pure energy and get pumped into the middle platform, there are 2 magnetic fields set up, that actually are connected to each other. The force of the energy then collapse in itself so, so that antimatter is getting produced in the center. This makes it a infinite energy source. The Factory was using ALOT of other usurpations in their Civilization. Against the will clean the pipes, use ropes to attach certain platforms and so on.
However, there were alot of aliens that got mad about the faction and the way they got treated, they said: We are getting used for your power and for your factions. We cant allow this, we cant allow the harming you did on our creatures. we are getting used unfairly and for no other reason than this, we will declare a war to stop this once and for all.

- Why you think the map deserves to be approved: This map is rather a unique one due to the decoration attached to several doors that loop back and forth which also can create a either hovering feature or a slight movement feature.
- Any other comments: No.


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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] zibuya-energy

Postby Kiriakos Gr96 » 5 October 2020, 19:22

Playtest 1

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Try to make the bg lighter rn the map seem to dark.


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Edge wall looks too flat compared to other fancy structured walls



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I would suggest to remove the ropes or put rope to the other walls too in the top part of the map.


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Add a laser here too.


In the map i would suggest to make the walls dark plate or white plate because stripes seems to not fit well with the bgs.
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] zibuya-energy

Postby Zibuya » 5 October 2020, 21:40

New Update including fixes:

-made the bg lighter by replacing the texture with bright panel

-added more additional walls on the edge walls for more structure

-added ropes on every wall platform, that was only connected with pipes

-added laser and changed hex color for left and right side

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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] zibuya-energy

Postby EOw » 9 October 2020, 03:13

I would suggest you add a little more light to the map, as it is very hard to see in some areas

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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] zibuya-energy

Postby Jerry- » 9 October 2020, 09:30

Make bg hex color more brighter
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] zibuya-energy

Postby Stryde » 9 October 2020, 17:27

Zibuya-energy (2nd playtest - second approval chance)
- Map needs better lighting in lower portion of map https://prnt.sc/uw8v8y
- Wall overlapping needs to be validated in many areas of the map - PM me if you want help
- Provide some form of cover to maybe protect players going up gravitator https://prnt.sc/uw8x55
- Map is small enough to not require teleport grenade for movement

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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] zibuya-energy

Postby Zibuya » 9 October 2020, 22:53

New Update/Fixes for Map ''zibuya-energy'':

-Refined the lighting by setting the shadow size map to a lower value

-Overlapped every wall that had less wideness than other parts of the map

-Added covers on the left and on the ride sight to prevent unwanted ways

-Removed the teleport grenade

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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] zibuya-energy

Postby Stryde » 14 October 2020, 19:39

Zibuya-energy (3rd playtest - second approval chance)
- Still dark in lower portion of map (must add lights AND adjust shadowmapsize) https://prnt.sc/uz9wrr https://prnt.sc/uz9wzt
- This cover can be extended a bit, for same reasons as last playtest https://prnt.sc/uz9xzy
- Add cables where red lines are https://prnt.sc/uz9ylj
- Add a raised wall (for players to crouch behind) in middle to provide cover to take away a campspot where I am currently standing in screenshot https://prnt.sc/uza0gd
- Shift wall down by 20-40px for more cover https://prnt.sc/uza26m https://prnt.sc/uza2fl

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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] zibuya-energy

Postby Zibuya » 14 October 2020, 20:28

Fixes and Improvements were made:

-added lights and adjusted the shadowmapsize for the map

-extended the covers by 20px

-added cables in bottom middle

-added a wall in middle so theres a way to get cover behind it

-shifted down the walls by 20px

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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] zibuya-energy

Postby Kiriakos Gr96 » 24 October 2020, 18:11

Map is now approved.
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