Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] yizhe-fantommpch2

Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] yizhe-fantommpch2

Postby yizhe » 13 June 2020, 13:11

- To the best of my knowledge, the following map fits all requirements to be approved: YES
- The following map contains no unfair hidden features: YES
- The following map contains nothing against the PB2 Code of Conduct: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Required Reading for posting a Map Approval Request: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Map Approval Rules: YES

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- Map Name: pb2sidelore (Chapter 2) Fantom
- Map ID: yizhe-fantommpch2
- Link to Map Page: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m= ... antommpch2
- Link to Map Demo: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=yizhe-fantommpch2

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- Give a brief description of the map: This is a multiplayer map version of my upcoming singlepayer series "plazma burst 2 side lore, Chapter 2- Fantom".
- Why you think the map deserves to be approved: Why not?
- Any other comments: This map was meant to be used for singleplayer, but the arena is too awesome for that.
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Re: Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] yizhe-fantommpch2

Postby Kiriakos Gr96 » 13 June 2020, 15:09

Interesting map
but the overuse of decors make the map heavy and not pleasing to the eye
also there are decor which are hight quality and then you use pixel backgrounds (imo it looks out of place)
Also it hard to tell which decors or solid or not
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Also the way how you made the leader at the crane it could lead to deaths if the player got lagged at the momment he climbs
And the endpoints of the map are visible

This map right now i dont think it can work as approved but it might be good for custom games
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Re: Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] yizhe-fantommpch2

Postby yizhe » 13 June 2020, 16:51

thats quite good feedback there. Cheers! :D
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Re: Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] yizhe-fantommpch2

Postby Build » 13 June 2020, 17:37

this map is a mess
like what kiri said, overuse of decors

combination of pixel backgrounds and decors are bad
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] yizhe-fantommpch2

Postby Girl_Power » 13 June 2020, 23:56

The map layout is okay but the use of decorations and pixel background is what downgrades the map. Never have I seen a pixel map with that many decorations get approved. Try to make the map more minimalist with fewer decors.
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