[APPROVAL REQUEST] BlvxkByrd-Iraq

[APPROVAL REQUEST] BlvxkByrd-Iraq

Postby BlvxkByrd » 30 May 2020, 21:11

[1]
- To the best of my knowledge, the following map fits all requirements to be approved: Yes
- The following map contains no unfair hidden features: No
- The following map contains nothing against the PB2 Code of Conduct: No
- I have read and understand fully the Required Reading for posting a Map Approval Request: Yes
- I have read and understand fully the Map Approval Rules: Yes

[2]
- Map Name: Iraq
- Map ID: blvxkbyrd-iraq
- Link to Map Page: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m= ... &id=983507
- Link to Map Demo: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=blvxkbyrd-iraq

[3]
- Give a brief description of the map: Iraq Lobster is a well known alias of mine, taken from the show "Family Guy". Iraq Lobster has built it's base here.
- Why you think the map deserves to be approved: I believe we can all agree there isn't a map out there that quite has as unique of a design as this map I have made. Completely original map design that has been extensively edited and tested to ensure delivery of the best game play possible. I also tried to make it as immersive as possible, using weapons like the AK-47 in a desert-like environment.
- Any other comments: N/A
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] BlvxkByrd-Iraq

Postby Nyove » 31 May 2020, 07:24

Hi,

The concept of the map is great, like a real war themed kind of map.
However I have some critics about the map.

1. Inconsistency usage of the walls.
Some of the walls are black and others are rock. I feel like the black walls do not complement the overall feel of the map in general. Try experimenting with other walls.

2. Black background and black walls can be confusing to differentiate.
Self-explanatory. An example would be the entrances of your tower.

3. Design of the tower could be improved.
There invisible doors around the walls of the tower. If this is to prevent glitching, maybe make the actual walls of the tower thicker. The top of the tower seems abit squeezy. The background of the tower may be confusing too.

4. Walls at the end of the map.
Wall is not thick and tall enough. Instead of putting a pusher that damages and pushes the player away, maybe try making the wall taller so that it's unreachable. Also, I can see sky after the edge of the map, so try making the wall thicker.

5. Neon blue strip wall design is questionable.
Self explanatory.

6. Strips of walls in the middle of the map is questionable too.
Self explanatory. The layers are supposed to be seperated from each other, I see no reason why you should be able to shoot your enemy across layers.

7. Linear map overall.
Instead of having one straight wall underground, it would be nice if there is more of a structure / slopes as well as covers underground. This is more visually appealing and also enhances gameplay experiences.

Same goes for the area on top.

There are many other minor issues but I suggest to work on these 7 main issues first.
If you want an example of a good approved map, check out kubakuba's map. (Give yourself an understand of what I mean by wall structure.)

Here's a link to one of his approved map, Lost Control 3: https://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=9&a=&m= ... &id=927461
Final note: You probably know, but there are some unapproved custom arts in the map.
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] BlvxkByrd-Iraq

Postby BlvxkByrd » 31 May 2020, 08:24

The art inside of the map needs to be approved in order for the map to be approved?
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Re: [APPROVAL REQUEST] BlvxkByrd-Iraq

Postby Nyove » 31 May 2020, 11:18

Yea, because in other player's screen it's just a red background.
This is to prevent people from uploading sensitive / copyrighted content for others to see.

Once the custom art is approved, then other players can see the art.
Right now we can't see it, it's just a red transculent background.
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