[APPROVED] iswift-wreckage

[iswift]

[A]
- To the best of my pizza sauce, the following map fits all requirements to be approved: YES
- The following map contains no unfair hidden features: YES
- The following map contains nothing against the PB2 Code of Conduct: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Required Reading for posting a Map Approval Request: YES
- I have read and understand fully the Map Approval Rules: YES

[B]
- Map Name: wreckage
- Map ID: iswift-wreckage
- Link to Map Demo: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?s=2&map=iswift-wreckage
- Link to Map Page: http://www.plazmaburst2.com/?a=&s=9&m=i ... 38244&pg=0

[C]
- Give a brief description of the map: its a map. lol.
- Why you think the map deserves to be approved: because i made it
- Any other comments: nah

[gani]

-to the best of my pizza sauce, lol wth

[iswift]

-to the best of my pizza sauce, lol wth

hahaha i was hoping someone would notice that

[MLG COOL DOMINIK]

Nope, Just because you made a map doesnt mean it should be approved, also you dont have "[APPROVAL REQUEST]" in the title, however, the map does look good.

[iswift]

Nope, Just because you made a map doesnt mean it should be approved, also you dont have "[APPROVAL REQUEST]" in the title, however, the map does look good.

thanks i fixed it. and yes it should b approved

[Dandamage]

The map lacks an engine mark to make you spawn with weapons in DM and TDM mode. While it is not in the requirements, it's a good thing to have.

In a part of the map it is a bit difficult to distinguish what can be touched and what is background. I suggest making a slightly different color for background details or changing the wall tile model. This is minor nitpicking so if you choose not to change this, it's fine.

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Also, the walls and backgrounds at the edge of the map must be extended, so the map doesn't look like it is floating.

[DoomWrath]

In your approval request, demo and page link are mixed up. This is highly incorrect and your map appeal is destroyed. Topic Superlocked and map deleted. You're also triple perma-banned.

/s - I've changed it in your topic but please check it next time.

[iswift]

The map lacks an engine mark to make you spawn with weapons in DM and TDM mode. While it is not in the requirements, it's a good thing to have.

In a part of the map it is a bit difficult to distinguish what can be touched and what is background. I suggest making a slightly different color for background details or changing the wall tile model. This is minor nitpicking so if you choose not to change this, it's fine.

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Also, the walls and backgrounds at the edge of the map must be extended, so the map doesn't look like it is floating.

hi dan thx for ur criticism, i changed the part where u couldnt tell, and added some water thing. i also extended the outer walls, and idk how to use the engine mark so idk :/

[Dandamage]

Map approved. Congratulations, iswift.

Topic locked.