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тнe ѕlayer lore [Thank you for the support!]

Postby Dandamage » 18 December 2016, 01:36

May contain some spoilers!

Summary of Vital Information about the Upsilon Organisation: http://textuploader.com/dhc3q

Since it is a huge text wall I simply uplodaded it somewhere else.
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Re: Reports from the Central Department of Civil Security

Postby Incompetence » 18 December 2016, 01:45

as "interesting" as this sounds, how is this art exactly?
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Re: Reports from the Central Department of Civil Security

Postby Dandamage » 18 December 2016, 02:00

I suggest you read Ripples of Time, from the same forum section and written by Garuda. It fits in the same category and has similar content.
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Re: Reports from the Central Department of Civil Security

Postby Incompetence » 18 December 2016, 02:11

Dandamage wrote:I suggest you read Ripples of Time, from the same forum section and written by Garuda. It fits in the same category and has similar content.

ripples of time is a story which justifies its place in the section, this isn't exactly a story and its not on the same level

this'd better fit the other art section if there was an accompanying image with it
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Re: Reports from the Central Department of Civil Security

Postby darkstar 1 » 18 December 2016, 09:39

Nice story :)

However, I'm not sure about the Noir Lime suit since Noir Lime came from a time before the CS existed.
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Re: Civil Security Reports and Upsilon Data

Postby Dandamage » 20 December 2016, 19:52

Updated. Added a little more reports and the Upsilon thingy.
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Re: Civil Security Reports and Upsilon Data

Postby Missak » 21 December 2016, 19:36

It feels weird. When I am reading this it makes me feel I am reading a script of some sort, as well as I keep imagining Morgan Freeman reading it (weird huh?)

I did really enjoy it though :)
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Re: Civil Security Reports and Upsilon Data

Postby GhostX5 » 3 January 2017, 13:06

This is so amazing, Dandamage! The Mark IV U "HELL SEEKER" Armor, I guess that'll be the unknown armor, also, the way you classify the armors like Mark I U "Lite Seeker", Mark II U "Noir Red" & Mark III U "Crimson Marine sounds like Halo's, but an alternative version, which is very impressive! I'd wish I could do this type of story, but I have to be correct on type of grammar and stuff like that. It feels weird to me also, I imagine Morgan Freeman reading these too!

Anyway, well done on making these two!
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Re: тнe ѕlayer lore [Thank you for the support!]

Postby Dandamage » 20 February 2017, 21:51

Just updated it with more lore about the characters and the ranks in the Summary of Vital Information about the Upsilon Organisation.
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