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Raven Weapons

Postby daft punk 777 » 19 May 2019, 05:36

Raven Pistol
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https://imgur.com/a/szM4UmN

Raven SMG
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https://imgur.com/a/Kc4TLTU

Raven ShotGun (not requires recharging after every shot, automatic shotgun?)
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https://imgur.com/a/YBafhg7

Raven SMG V2 (by roxxxar)
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https://imgur.com/a/2eXFAO1
Last edited by daft punk 777 on 21 May 2019, 13:18, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Raven Weapons

Postby Roxxar » 19 May 2019, 06:13

you should do the [img] forum tags because its annoying to copy and paste links manually

you have the colors and the line width down pat, but the overall shape of the weapons are just too blocky and rigid. try to make the shapes of the guns more ergonomic and rounded where guns typically may be.

also, dont just put lines inside the guns wherever to fill blank space. try to modulate the guns so that they look more complete rather than just full (i.e. the SMG's magazine has 2 or 3 diagonal lines. try making just 1 line that follows the length of the magazine, rather than random perpendicular lines).

only after you get these basics down will more creative ideas flow more fluidly and will truly begin to shine on this increasingly lacking sub-section of the forum.
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Re: Raven Weapons

Postby daft punk 777 » 19 May 2019, 10:10

thanks ! but i created lines not for fill space.
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Re: Raven Weapons

Postby Roxxar » 19 May 2019, 21:47

no i get that, but it just looks cluttered imo. what im saying (and as you may have seen me say on your other topics) is that in my opinion, there should be a little more fluidity in your art and designs

for example, here's your design vs. a quick one that i edited and made
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not trying to toot my own horn, but my design is much more rounded and fluid. the handle is less of a box and it looks a bit more rational/comfortable to hold. the lines within the gun serve a purpose rather than just being lines that go all the way across the gun (ejection port, select fire, unnecessary top ventilation ports, contour on foregrip + stock). i of course changed the design a little bit and maybe that's not what you originally had in mind, but you get the point

its the design and shape im talking about. once you get these down, you will be a great artist
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Re: Raven Weapons

Postby daft punk 777 » 21 May 2019, 13:11

ITS AWESOME! i think u can help me with arts :)
i want to add my version and your
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Re: Raven Weapons

Postby daft punk 777 » 21 May 2019, 13:13

thanks!!!!!
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Re: Raven Weapons

Postby Nexus B » 29 June 2019, 21:20

Well made. Btw these looks like defibrillator weapons. xD
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Re: Raven Weapons

Postby eru_ » 30 June 2019, 19:12

Roxxar wrote:no i get that, but it just looks cluttered imo. what im saying (and as you may have seen me say on your other topics) is that in my opinion, there should be a little more fluidity in your art and designs

for example, here's your design vs. a quick one that i edited and made
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not trying to toot my own horn, but my design is much more rounded and fluid. the handle is less of a box and it looks a bit more rational/comfortable to hold. the lines within the gun serve a purpose rather than just being lines that go all the way across the gun (ejection port, select fire, unnecessary top ventilation ports, contour on foregrip + stock). i of course changed the design a little bit and maybe that's not what you originally had in mind, but you get the point

its the design and shape im talking about. once you get these down, you will be a great artist

Roxarus's remake made the guns look good
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Re: Raven Weapons

Postby daft punk 777 » 1 July 2019, 03:39

lol i know it (cause added it in topic)
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