My first gun (I need some criticism)

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My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby Sayori » 19 November 2016, 04:08

Hey guys Sayori here and it's kinda bad but don't blame me it's my 1st time.
Anyways I used Paint.Net and it was laggy to it came out like this


http://i.imgur.com/NiC9AtN.png?1

Also anyone know good software thats for Mac that is free

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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby Chara_The_Warrior » 4 December 2016, 21:10

rubbish :( :P
but good for start :DDDDDD

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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby Missak » 5 December 2016, 18:21

I used to use GIMP as a drawing software once.

Anyhow, I agree with what Chara said. But still, you'll get better :)
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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby Sayori » 5 December 2016, 23:40

Thanks guys but I can't use the software anymore cause I had the demo I guess but I need something thats free more mac

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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby Kostadin 8 » 11 December 2016, 20:02

you cant really get a good software for free, except paint.net

on the topic itself the art is bad like 3/10 but since this is your first gun and also you dont have a good software, i give you a chance
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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby darkstar 1 » 11 December 2016, 22:53

Kostadin 8 wrote:you cant really get a good software for free, except paint.net

You could also use GIMP, it is also free.
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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby Sayori » 13 December 2016, 23:16

You guys are right it is rubbish but I ain't mad cuz it's true lol..... but GIMP I could try it but but you mind giving me a link just in case :3 thanks for the free back :D

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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby GhostX5 » 16 December 2016, 09:28

This gun looks cool, you'll become better by practicing this. I have some weapon concept arts, gonna create a topic for two concept arts of mine.

You have 3/10, but don't worry, I'll give you a chance too, like Kostadin 8 up there.
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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby SarcasticCreeper » 18 December 2016, 21:03

Nice, but looks a little boring. I can see that it resembles the minigun in the game, overall, not bad for a first try. ;)

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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby AI Robot » 21 December 2016, 06:03

You could try Krita for your Drawings. Btw its Grindy like some other :sorry: But good for a 1st time.
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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby Failureguy » 21 December 2016, 17:52

GIMP is another software you could get for free, like how I did for my art in here.

For the art, many improvements can be made here. The concept is there, however the lines that are drawn on the gun makes it unappealing for an eye to see, such as the outlines of the gun itself. Broken lines and uneven spacing are the cause of it.

There can be different colors for it too, but hey, you gave it a shot for your first try :). Make sure to improve and practice more however the criticism may be.
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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby PRabbit3 » 21 December 2016, 23:05

I give you a 4/10,because it's your first gun.



And I want to know how to post my own images on the forums,if you can help.
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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby Dark Reaver » 28 December 2016, 15:45

Did you make this with paint?

Give it a gun-look and more details and it will be a lot better.

Also, use a decent software
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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby Civil-Lite » 29 December 2016, 19:50

Yeah its ok for a good start, but you might need a lot more detail next time. Not bad though, not bad :T
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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby PotatoAssasin » 8 August 2017, 20:55

i quite like it! http://prntscr.com/g612nq reminds me of that haha for criticism i could say add more detail and add more parts to make it look like its a fanmade cus that gun looks plain just in one color the front part is good just work on adding stuff like lights blah blah dad da adad ad da
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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby lrv » 9 August 2017, 14:36

SO shading are definetly missing and the outlinings should be smoother. Other than that it's cool.
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Re: My first gun (I need some criticism)

Postby eru_ » 31 December 2018, 17:36

Not that bad i rate it 4/10 but it's a good start
you will improve
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