Plazma Burst 2: Opposing Force

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Re: Plazma Burst 2: Opposing Force, A New Journey Begins...

Postby stormforce » 12 April 2017, 15:56

Here is my feedback:
You spelled the name wrong. It is Clevor in this post, but Clover in the game. Also, when you have this gray text tip about skipping the part, there are numerous grammar errors as well. The two sentences do not tell enough, confusing the player. Did you mean to say, if the player was playing the level again, they could skip it? If so, please specify. Also, why would the player want to skip the level if it is boring? Probably increase the excitement of the gameplay. However, I like the map design and structure. But the civil security don't use names like that. You could do well with a name like "CS-Lite #66". Civil security lites also do NOT have 500 hp, so if you want this game to stay similar to the campaign you should lower his health. :O
http://prntscr.com/evl6b3 The cs-corvette doesn't have the rocket launcher. It appears you forgot to make a trigger
and timer or you forgot to link it to the gun allowing it for vehicles.
http://prntscr.com/evl5p3 ?!?! What is this ?
http://prntscr.com/evl5xn Structure somehow changes and the falkok has a raygun?
http://prntscr.com/evl6o8 What does this do?
Grubs don't appear in the campaign, maybe you should explain what the meaning of this is.
It is an okay map, I'd give it 2 stars out of 5 stars, because of the glitches and storyline errors, but I won't rate just yet.
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Re: Plazma Burst 2: Opposing Force, A New Journey Begins...

Postby Konquer » 13 April 2017, 15:52

Welp, if you want to stay in PB2 lore, then why the hell does Grubs have C9 weapons?! Also, why cant you pick them up?
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Re: Plazma Burst 2: Opposing Force, A New Journey Begins...

Postby Dandamage » 13 April 2017, 16:30

Konquer wrote:Welp, if you want to stay in PB2 lore, then why the hell does Grubs have C9 weapons?! Also, why cant you pick them up?


Correction Nine project did take place in the past (before PB:FttP) so some of it's technologies were used after project was closed. This includes the Falkoks and, plausibly, other groups of soldiers including the Grubs. I honestly don't know why you can't pick them up, though :v)

About the map itself, I don't feel like I have enough to actually give a rating. The combat was simple and there wasn't a story to be told. I can't know the context about everything, even though you said it is supposed to go with the lore.

For example: a CS Lite can kill many Grubs and Falkoks carrying a Ray Gun, so is he actually known by other soldiers to be a really good shot? He was only armed with a pistol as opposed to a pistol and a rifle like the soldiers at the first campaign mission. Was he in a rush and didn't have time to equip himself properly or something? The drone is actually pretty tough for some unknown reason. Is that a special drone model? Why was it deployed there?

I can't really say "oh, this is wrong and this is right". There isn't an explanation yet, and we don't know IF it will have an explanation at all. So I'll refrain from rating this one until there are more maps or if this one gets updated.
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Re: Plazma Burst 2: Opposing Force, A New Journey Begins...

Postby cleaver54 » 28 May 2017, 04:51

I like his name :3, and good demo.
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Re: Plazma Burst 2: Opposing Force, A New Journey Begins...

Postby lrv » 22 July 2017, 12:41

This is an awesome map!!!
The only not so good thing are the positions of the air generators.
Too I have one request:In my map campaign A Usurpation Mission Grubs are... Warning! Spoilers to not published maps!


...Humans that were Biologically modified by the Falkonians and now work for them. Can you make your campaign interact with mine that way? Grubs werealready working for the Falkonians so I wouldn't be so hard.
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Re: Plazma Burst 2: Opposing Force, A New Journey Begins...

Postby TerminatorRex » 20 November 2017, 19:44

The displacer is the best weapon in opposing force IMO.
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Re: Plazma Burst 2: Opposing Force, A New Journey Begins...

Postby ChaoSquid » 25 November 2017, 10:14

I'm on level two, and I love this map so far! The starting level is great. I love how the "Terrain" so to say, is abstract and interesting, the enemy placement is good, and the aesthetic is beautiful. You should try to make a map creation tutorial. I haven't found any tutorials, except for Reject's, which, don't get me wrong, there's a lot of helpful information, but it doesn't really go into stuff like enemy placement.
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Re: Plazma Burst 2: Opposing Force, A New Journey Begins...

Postby Unfairness » 26 November 2017, 12:05

The map is great, awesome, and the design is excellent.

But about one thing. Why are the Lite Railgun, Assault Rifle C-01r, and Ray Gun unknown to the player? It has been introduced being wielded by the CS in the early and late levels of the Campaign.
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Re: Plazma Burst 2: Opposing Force, A New Journey Begins...

Postby Spartz » 28 November 2017, 14:17

http://prntscr.com/hgbu4w Is the drone intentional to be neutral?
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Re: Plazma Burst 2: Opposing Force, A New Journey Begins...

Postby Unfairness » 29 November 2017, 15:24

silverteen11 wrote:
Spartz wrote:http://prntscr.com/hgbu4w Is the drone intentional to be neutral?


Not really but I still haven't found out what the problem with it was.


I think I found out the reason why.

I too experienced the same problem while working on my map. And when I scroll down for a character for the player, I found a character named 'Drone Controller'. It is found between the Advanced Usurp and Android T-01 and have no image.

It works perfectly fine when I put the Drone Controller in the drone, but not the rest of the characters

At least the M4 and Glock are now added to ALE ^_^
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Half-Life: Opposing Force

Postby Vexiled » 29 December 2017, 16:24

Alright, first of all I'd like to say good job. You've done well with this campaign thus far and definitely deserve some praise, so I'll do just that:

https://prnt.sc/httksr
This is by far the best thing ever and I love every bit of it. It's a nice little touch and rewards people who try to mess around with everything.

https://prnt.sc/httsmb
I wouldn't have noticed this if I hadn't died a couple of times, but good job with this one. It's simple, but supports different peoples play-styles. If they had sped through that scene and the guy kept talking then the dialogue might have gotten all jumbled if they ran into another scene (Though I don't think there are any others nearby, but still nice).

I also enjoy the structure of the map, It's all rather unique and never really feels bland. The BG's are simplistic but nicely so, with often some variety here and there to keep things fresh.


That's about enough praise for you, I think you've got the picture that I like it at this point. But what's a proper comment without a bit of criticism?

https://prnt.sc/httmnr | https://prnt.sc/httn8a
It just looks odd seeing that it's daylight outside yet barely any light is coming from these windows. You should add a light at the center of them, since it will look more realistic and give some ambiance. I'm not sure if there were other windows like this, there were the only ones I noticed.

https://prnt.sc/httvdn
Pretty self-explanatory, wouldn't you say?

https://prnt.sc/httn8a
Just some slight grammar issues with here. Not a big deal, just helps. Again, this was the only one I noticed, there might be more.

Overall? Good map as always Silver.
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